DerangedDom's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Plataformero Demo English Version]

This game is unfinished. and a few things need to be corrected.

1. WASD you do NOT move with those keys. Actually you have to use the arrow keys.
2. Although this is one of those random games, this game does not compete with the others due to the unclear instructions and objectives in game.
3. There was a part where I fell into a pit and I was stuck impossible to go back I couldn't die in the area or anything I was just stuck in this little pit. This is an example of bad level design if you have a part where you can get trapped you should at least enable the player to reset the level without having to refresh the page and start all over.

Final score 1/5

[Wild Carrot 3xb]

This is a pretty odd game honestly. The length of the game is terribly short and the whole reason why I'm shooting carrots with a cannon is unclear. Please add more content before you try to release this game.

Artur-Felipe responds:

Thank you!

[ReJect]

Okay! Grooly I am definitely feeling this game bro bro! This is a very interesting game I was always fascinated with the type of games that involved drawings coming to life! There are a few things I want to touch upon though because there is a reason I didn't give the game 5 stars.

First this game is a bit buggy. I believe I made it to the end but I couldn't finish it due to the game glitching making me have to refresh my page which started the game all over. So to compensate for this problem I advise you put some type of save system so players can start where they left off. Furthermore when you die and an enemy is attacking you even when your dead it makes the death sound constantly repeat over and over( Which gets pretty annoying real fast). That's what I think caused the glitching but that's just a theory.

Second I feel as though this game could have a more vigorous soundtrack if you need some music message me and I'm pretty sure we can work something out (I know people that make game soundtracks).

Overall the game itself is pretty unique the art design and the difficulty keeps it very entertaining. Especially when the creator is just constantly drawling more and more enemies onto the screen. I also give you more props because you used the unity engine.

Final score: 4/5

Grooly responds:

Thank you for such big answer.
I'm glad that you liked this game)
Yeah, I know about some bugs. Please, PM me about the glitch that you experienced.

[Duck n Jump]

This is a pretty decent game Johngreene. The concept is pretty simple. The design is pretty simple. This game is overall simple. It brings nothing new to the table when it comes to content but honestly I like this game but I do however, don't really think the game is ready to make the game stand out more I believe that you should add a bit more content to make it stand out. This is newgrounds a place of innovation and where people take simple flash games and turn them into legendary internet games. You should create some type of character creation screen for some type of customization that will keep the gamer engaged or instead of collecting huge stars to change the color of your character you should instead have the player collect a whole bunch of little stars. This is so that they can save them up and purchase a different color. These are just my thoughts.

Johngreene responds:

Thanks a lot for the Review, I will take these thoughts into consideration while working!
I like your thinking!

~Johngreene~